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Writing App 2.0ï»¿An Eevee and a Lotad, a pairing of two, were waiting outside in the intense rain, beating down on both them and the ground. The two of them trembled in anxiety."I'll knock on the door, and you follow behind," he told his partner, the Lotad. Ouroboros, the Eevee, went up to the door as said, and knocked on it. No response. "Hel-" Unexpectedly the door was slammed open as fast as lightning, a Ninetales glowering in front of the two."Come in, come in! My goodness, come in! I canât believe youâve all been waiting outside in the rain all this time! You could have knocked earlier, you know!""Knock knock?" He muttered, surprised by how abruptly he answered the door."My name is Callahan, or Calla, for short. Iâm the guild registrar, you know. Iâm quite good at it!""Uh..Hello." The Eevee stammered, very nervous now."Oh, please allow me to take your belongings, theyâr